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the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population.

the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population.
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The given table illustrates the most crowded nations around the world, which are
China
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,
India
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, and
USA
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. At first glance, it is seen that
China
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 and
India
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 have a considerable
population
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,
while
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 the urban
population
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 metric is significantly higher in the
USA
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To begin
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 with,
China
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 and
India
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 have the highest rate of
population
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, where
China
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 recorded 1.415 billion citizens and
India
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 placed second with 1.354 billion. Meanwhile,
China
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 has the most significant land space which is 9388
million
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kilometers
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kilometres
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 square, which is around quadruple
India
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's land
area
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with
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of
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 2973
million
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kilometers
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.
Also
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, the increasing proportion of the
population
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 +1.11% after 2017 and the massive density of 455, as recorded for
India
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.
However
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, the
USA
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 has a considerable land
area
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 which displays the second highest
area
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 in the table with 9147
million
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 kilometers square.
Moreover
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, the
USA
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 has the smallest number of individuals which is 327
million
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, and the occupied dense of people at 36 does not pose any problem for American citizens in comparison with the other two countries.
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,
USA
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 urban peoples are around 83% much more than in
China
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 and
India
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, where the rural
area
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 is nearly half of the country and a minority of Indians are in the city.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, india, usa, population, million, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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