The diagram shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

The diagram highlights the manufacturing of aluminium

cans

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which are to be recycled there are seven steps in the

process

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from

transfering

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transferring

the

cans

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through trucks to

labling

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labelling

back and ready to be used again after the

cans

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are used, they are discarded in recycling bins., waiting for

truck

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to transport them to

recycling

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the recycling

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plant once there , they are cleaned with water and sorted out in form

of

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group

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which is

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ready for shredding and compressing during

this

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process

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the unusable

cans

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are pas to shredding

maching

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machine

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those that can be reused are compressed into blocks the blocks

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down by crushing machine into

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which

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subsequently

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cleaned to remove any residue

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,

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to pass these small pieces into

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healing

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and melting machine to form raw material

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these

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raw material is made into aluminium

cans

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which are labelled over these

cans

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as these

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plastics

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a 5-6mm thickness

finally

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the

cans

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are ready to be filled with liquid and ready to be recycled as these

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go through the recycling

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all over again 74 % of

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citizen reused the recycled

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overall

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, the recycling of aluminium

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is a cyclical

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that

consist

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of use

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collecting

colleting

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collecting

sorting crushing melting and

labeling

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labelling

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and

reused

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them again all over