Some people believe that young people benefit from working while studying at school or university. Others think that young people will achieve more by focussing on their studies. Discuss both of the view points and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. days?

There are split

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opinions

regarding the

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achievements

and

work

. Some people believe that it is more

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beneficial

to

work

while

studying,

whereas

other

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of thinkers support that achievements can be earned by giving all of the time to

study

.

However

, both have their own pros and cons.

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decision

, both

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aspects will be discussed.

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the former

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opinion

, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is

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financially

financial

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indisputable

.

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is because they can earn

money

from

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jobs and that can be used to fulfil all the needs for them or for their

study

as well.

Furthermore

, It is

also

a help for their parents as they can help them too.

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, they

also

believe that it

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a big opportunity

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them to learn the value of

money

. The reason is they do hard

work

to earn

money

and manage time to that as well.

On the contrary

, the second view

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that students need to focus on their

study

in addition

to

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something in

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their

life because students will get

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distracted

by working. By

this

I mean, students have

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already

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lot

of

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pressure

of

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study

and their future, if they will do

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, they will not be able to focus on it.

Thus

,

to conclude

and

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my opinion, it can be

finally

said that despite the issue of focusing on

study

due to

alot

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a lot

of pressure, I would say that it have more benefit to

work

along their

study

as it

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money

to support

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themselves

.