the graph shows data about the annual earnnings of 3 bakeries in calgary in 2000-2010
The line graph illustrates
yearly
incomes of 3 Correct article usage
the yearly
differents
bakeries Correct your spelling
different
of
Calgary from 2000 to 2010.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Amandine bakery
and Bolo Capitalize word
Bakery
cakery
rose in Capitalize word
Cakery
time
of the period. Meanwhile, Mari bakeshop decreased after some Add an article
the time
flactuations
over Correct your spelling
fluctuations
fluctuation
the
time.
Stood at just under 60000, the Amandine bakery remained constant Correct article usage
apply
during
5 Change preposition
for
years
and there was a sudden glow to about 100000 in 2008. The next 2 years
had slightly grow
to Change the verb form
grown
little
more than 100000. The Mari bakeshop Correct article usage
a little
count
80000, Change the verb form
counts
it
is Correct pronoun usage
which
similar
number after 4 Add an article
the similar
a similar
years
from the beginning. There was a sharp fall despite some little flactuations
and they Correct your spelling
fluctuations
fluctuation
accaounted
40000 in 2008. After that, Correct your spelling
accounted
number
of earnings was unchanged over Change the article
a number
the number
last
period. The Bolo cakery Correct article usage
the last
start
Wrong verb form
started
from
20000 and steadily Change preposition
in
increase
to 40000 in 2003. Wrong verb form
increased
However
, the next 4 years
they stable at this
rate of earnings. 2006 to 2010 saw a steady rise of
annual Change preposition
in
earning
, and Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
calculate
Wrong verb form
calculated
at the end
above 60000.Submitted by aikumarbekarys on
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