The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides details about tourists going out and coming
in to
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the United Kingdom in two decades starting from 1979,
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the bar chart compares the five most visited nations by
UK
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citizens in 1999, both measured in millions. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, both visits abroad by the people in the
UK
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and vice versa had increasing trends,
although
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the increasing number of
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travels
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overseas is far more noticeable than international residents who come to the
UK
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.
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, folks from the
UK
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who travel abroad kicked off at vaguely above 10
million
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in 1979 before rising to almost 20 in the next five years. The figure dramatically jumped to more than double that number in 10 years and continued to climb beyond 50 by the end of the reporting period.
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, international visitors in the
UK
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moderately rose from time to time. The number barely changed in the first five years and only started to double in the first decade. In 1999, there were barely 30
million
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foreigners in the
UK
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. In 1999, more than 10
million
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UK
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travellers chose France as their destination, followed by Spain with approximately 9
million
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UK
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visitors. Afterwards, three other choices had slight gaps between each other, consisting of the USA, Greece, and Turkey, with less than 5
million
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visitors for each country.
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