The map shows the developments which took place the coastal resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The map shows the developments which took place the coastal resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
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The construction in the coastal resort of Templeton over a period of 15 years is depicted in the given map.
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, it can be seen that between 1990 and 2005, the
area
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underwent dramatic changes. In 1990, there
are
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were
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several trees, with a random distribution in the
area
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.
Moreover
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, a railway station was situated in the east of the map.
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, a school and a hospital
is
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are
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sited
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situated
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to the west of the railway. The
socond
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second
map reveals that the location of these buildings did not change until 2005.
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, in 2005, it is observable that serious developments were taken place.
Cosidering
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Considering
green spaces, most trees were cut down to make way for developments.
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, with regard to
residental
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residential
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area
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areas
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, small houses were
repleced
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replaced
with several large buildings.
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, a new factory, supermarket, and airport were constructed in the southeast, west and northeast of the town, respectively.
Additionally
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, the railway extended to the southeast and south of the
area
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and a new bridge was built in
this
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regard. Another thing that was provided in the
feery
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fiery
in the southeast of the region, making water
trasportation
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transportation
possible.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Coastal resort
  • Development
  • Infrastructure
  • Commercial district
  • Residential area
  • Harbor
  • Marina
  • Pedestrian walkways
  • Urban planning
  • Environmental impact
  • Renovation
  • Tourism industry
  • Recreational facilities
  • Expansion
  • Accessibility
  • Modernization
  • Attraction
  • Accommodation
  • Economic growth
  • Leisure activities
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