you took a trip, during this trip your suitcase got damaged. write a letter to the bus company, in your letter inform the bus company of when and where you travelled, describe your suitcase and what happened to it, explain why company should pay for a new suitcase

Dear smith, I am writing to complain
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serious defect in my
suitcase
when I was
traveling
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with your agency.
The
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1 of November in the Mehrabad airport In the 2 terminal I gave my
suitcase
to a member of your staff for flight Number Ac123 to Kish.
Unfortunately
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when I received my
suitcase
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the Kish airport I noticed
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bog
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damage on the front wheel, I said about it to your staff and they
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me to you. My
suitcase
is the latest design
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the Pierr
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Pierr
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Pierre
Cardin brand and
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very expensive, It costs 5000$. I am sure you will understand that
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problem is causing me considerable inconvenience, so I am looking forward to receiving a replacement Or depositing 5000$ to my visa card as soon as possible. You can find a Photo of my
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below. The information about my address and my Visa card number has been attached. Best regards Vida Shojaee
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph conveys a single idea clearly. Consider grouping information logically, with separate paragraphs for the incident description, the damage claim, and the expected resolution.
greeting and closing
Open your letter with an appropriate formal greeting and close with a suitable sign-off. Review common letter conventions to improve the professional tone of your letter.
task achievement
Ensure that the content of your letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task. Provide clear details about when and where you travelled, a full description of the suitcase and damage, and a justified resolution request.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistently formal and polite tone throughout the letter. Avoid informal language and ensure that your request for compensation is courteous and professional.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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