The diagram show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
the given map depicts information about the
changes
which were made in the museum and its surroundings areas in 1990 and 2010
initially
, the museum contain the main path
which straight
ahead to the garden that Add a missing verb
is straight
including
Replace the word
includes
palnts
and trees. to the left Correct your spelling
plants
side
of the path
there is
Wrong verb form
was
huge
car park Correct article usage
a huge
area
which was shared with ground
by having a Add an article
the ground
zig zag
line between them to the left Add a hyphen
zig-zag
side
of the path
there was large
block which was divided into two main Add an article
a large
part
the bottom end contained Fix the agreement mistake
parts
cottage
Correct article usage
a cottage
area
while
the upper area
contained the main entrance store room and three shops next to each other after that, both the sides of park
was attached to the main road
on the other Add an article
the park
hands
, the main road followed by Fix the agreement mistake
hand
path
which leads to Add an article
a path
the path
garden
remained the same Correct article usage
the garden
however
, the right side
of path
that Add an article
the path
a path
were
shared Change the verb form
was
in
between but now Change preposition
apply
it
has been made for Correct pronoun usage
apply
car
park extended it longer occupying the Correct article usage
a car
area
of the garden moreover
, to the left side
the cottage was replaced by cafe and shops that were three in number now reduced to two in total. the entrance and store room space seen
some Add a missing verb
have seen
changes
too
overall
, it is vivdly
manifested that there was some Correct your spelling
vividly
changes
made according to
its surrounding however
major changes
were made on the left side
of the path
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, path, side, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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