The maps below show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today

The diagrams

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Colwick Arts

Centre

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between 2005 and today.

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, at first glance,

it is clear that

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Colwick Arts

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has witnessed major development in its infrastructure. Being ruralised in the previous year.

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, now the art

centre

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visibly changed into

developed

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one.

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the

map

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, a snack bar was located on the

north-eastern

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side of the

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and it has been separated

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3 different buildings. These are drama studio, meeting room 1 and meeting room 2. There was a concert hall and a cinema in the middle of the

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which was demolished.

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of that building, the cinema has been reconstructed

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the west side of the drama studio. The meeting room and the toilet in the

south-west

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of the information desk

was

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replaced with

bigger

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a bigger

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building

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the gallery. But the information desk has

been remained

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the same. The wasteland to the south was flattened and

give

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way to the outdoor exhibition and performance area. The stage is constructed just beside the exhibition area and it is surrounded by some trees. At the

centre

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of the

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map

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the central exhibition area

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opened

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, the gallery 1 and the gallery 2 was replaced with the concert hall on the west side of the

map

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. The toilet to the south of the concert hall is built.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

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The maps below show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today

Newspapers have influenced people's ideas and opinions. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative situation? the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative situation?

Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Some youngsters are taking a year off after finishing school. What are the benefits of it? Do the pros outweigh the cons? Discuss both sides and give your opinion.