The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The picture of maps represents the prior and post-development of the isle for the purpose of tourism
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as well as
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various other amenities. These maps are scaled on a 100-meter scale. As per the image, the
island
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has been improved considerably with the expansion of convenience and several new developments can be seen in the second image. The most notable changes are that the peninsula now has ample accommodation for travellers and there is
pier
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to enable visitors to access the
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. And, boats are the medium to commute to the islet. One of the most striking changes are the accommodation huts which are well connected through footpaths and vehicle tracks which have been created around the reception, restaurant and residing area.
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, a total of 6 huts have been constructed on the west of the
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and another 9 have been built around the centre of the
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.
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, the trees which were scattered around the coral reef land have been left untouched, and a swimming area has been created just adjacent to the beach.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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