The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The
map
illustrates the development of the village called Ryemouth between 1995 and present
.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, there were several changes, however
, the most significant change was the deforestation of forest
park.
As can clearly be seen, In the past Correct article usage
the forest
in
the east of the Change preposition
on
map
there was farmland and forest
park. In the West of the Correct article usage
a forest
map
there used to be a housing. There Add a comma
map,
also
were a shop, fish market, hotel, cafe and a fishing port.
Turning to present
, as the Correct article usage
the present
map
illustrates, there were several changes, in the place where used to be a shop now there is a restaurant and in the place where used to be fish
market currently there are apartments. Next to the hotel was built a car park. In 1995 there used to be a fishing port, which currently cannot be seen. Correct article usage
a fish
However
Add a comma
However,
besides
several changes
there was a cafe which was the same as it was in 1995.Add a comma
changes,
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