Nowadays most
of Change preposition
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sports
animals
are existsWrong verb form
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among
people
in the world. The issues of blood
sports
are becoming popular in the entire world. There are a lot of
people
askCorrect pronoun usage
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about how
people
to Fix the infinitive
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care with
animalFix the agreement mistake
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moreoverCorrect word choice
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animalFix the agreement mistake
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while
in the
sportFix the agreement mistake
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animals
. Some of
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already
these issues to be banned. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views based on my experience.
First and foremost, there are a lot of
a Correct article usage
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positive
effectFix the agreement mistake
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being held
sportFix the agreement mistake
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animals
. It can
avoidVerb problem
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people
from injury in doing
sport
.
Moreover
, most of the
animals
hasChange the verb form
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aChange the article
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instinct to play in the competition. The
beneficialReplace the word
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of these
animals
which is utilized by
humanFix the agreement mistake
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in the competition.
As a result
,
people
can create money by doing
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sportFix the agreement mistake
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animals
and
also
demand
ofChange preposition
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people
who watch these
competitionFix the agreement mistake
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has
increaseChange the verb form
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through outCorrect your spelling
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of Change preposition
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the year. It is evidence that there are television
serialFix the agreement mistake
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inChange preposition
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Discovery Channel
hasWrong verb form
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been broadcast about
sportFix the agreement mistake
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animals
once a week.
Furthermore
, there is a serious problem to address these issues.
ValueCorrect article usage
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of humanity is below
of Change preposition
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human
rightFix the agreement mistake
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. How
people
cruel to the
animals
that is
only
forChange preposition
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take their revenue. The higher authority
needChange the verb form
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to prevent
byCorrect pronoun usage
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developing a regulation about animal abuse.
For instance
, in
the community who
beingAdd a missing verb
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held
Change preposition
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sportFix the agreement mistake
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animals
will be
by authority.
Moreover
, they will be 2 years in the
and
also
there is a fine.
Therefore
, since the regulation of
animalsChange the noun form
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abuse
setAdd a missing verb
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up by the government, the
sports
animalsChange the noun form
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events in Indonesia
decreaseWrong verb form
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significantly.
In summary, most
people
animalFix the agreement mistake
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to create money by crueling
animalFix the agreement mistake
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in
the Correct article usage
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blood
sports
.
ItCorrect pronoun usage
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is because the demand
ofChange preposition
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people
who watch these
sportFix the agreement mistake
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riseWrong verb form
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over the period.
Nevertheless
,
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animal abuse has to
preventWrong verb form
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by all
people
in the entire world. Specifically, each
countriesChange to a singular noun
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need to set up
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regulation about
sport
animals
to prevent killing
animalAdd an article
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.