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Band 8.5

A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter •describe the problem; •explain how it affects you; •say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the chairs and tables which you kept on the pedestrian pathway. I am Sam, currently living in Toronto City in the Woodside neighbourhood for the past twenty-five years. Since my childhood, I have always crossed your prestigious restaurant to reach my office. Recently, I hope your organisation made some changes to the interior and exterior design of the building.
In addition
, your firm kept some chairs and tables on the pathway which made us feel uncomfortable
while
 walking on the sideway.
Furthermore
, when you placed the furniture on the sideway it made us walk with some difficulty.
Moreover
, I am a physically challenged person, and whenever I want to cross your company, at that time, I need someone to help me to cross your firm. It is okay when someone is there on the spot, but think when no one is there to help me to shift from that place.
Finally
, if you not taking any action against
this
 issue,
then
 I will be writing a complaint letter to the police department
as well as
 to the city hall to remove the furniture from the spot. I hope you can understand the scenario and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam
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task achievement
Be cautious with the tone in your conclusion to ensure it remains polite and constructive, even when making firm requests or expressing potential actions.
task achievement
Try to provide specific examples or suggestions on how the issue could be resolved, which can make your letter more constructive.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear and logical flow throughout your letter for coherence. You've done well, but always double-check that each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next.
coherence cohesion
Consider adding a brief, courteous closing statement to complete your letter on a positive note, maintaining both formality and a sense of goodwill.
task achievement
Your letter effectively introduces the problem, outlines its impact on you, and indicates potential actions, which fulfills the task requirements.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a good logical structure, with each paragraph focusing on a single idea, enhancing the letter's overall clarity.
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