The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations.
The graph illustrates details about the figures of Catholics
leaving
in separate countries.
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living
It is clear that
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apply
Philippines
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the Philippines
lead
the charts from the beginning until the end of the period, even though they had a decrease Wrong verb form
led
at the end
. Japan was the least Linking Words
althoght
there was a slight increase, it was not enough to be better than Correct your spelling
although
anyother
country.
In 2010, China and India stood at 9000,000 and 10,570,000 respectively. In corresponding they are the only two countries that saw Correct your spelling
any other
another
thier
figure Correct your spelling
their
increaased
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increase
by
2013 with 15,000,000 and 19,000,000. Japan Change preposition
in
also
saw a 100 boost in their digits.
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The Phillipines
Phillipines
lead the graph with 7500 that figure which witnessed a drop Correct your spelling
Philippines
300
in 2015. Change preposition
of 300
Viernam
saw a slight deep between Correct your spelling
Vietnam
then
period Linking Words
while
the largest drop came from Linking Words
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Korea
korea
whose number fell dramatically by 400 Change the capitalization
Korea
at the end
of the given periodLinking Words
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