The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The table depicts how many

inches

about

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rainfall

, over the year between January to December in

Woodsville

and

Blackboro

Overall

, in

Woodsville

maximum

rainfall

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from

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November to December. In

Blackboro

become

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minimal

rainfall

compare

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compared

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with

Woodsville

. In

Woodsville

, it has

maximum

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a maximum

the maximum

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number of

raining

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rain

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from

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November to

Decembe

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December

. It is about 6 and 5.5

inches

respectively.

Lowest

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The lowest

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rain

came in July and it

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was

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0.75

inches

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From

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January to

July

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July,

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Woodsville

rainfall

dramatically

decrease

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decreased

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over these 7 months. It is shows 5,4,3.75,2.5,1.75,1.5 and 0.75 orderly. On the

oher

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other

hand

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Blackboro

normally

illustrate

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illustrates

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minimal

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the minimal

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value of

rain

. In

Blackboro

May to September

rainfall

inches

less than 1. July is

ths

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the

lowest

rain

came in

this

city. It is about 0.01.

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From

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January to

February

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February,

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it becomes much considerable

rain

about 3,4

inches

respectively.

Finally

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compare

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compared

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with these two cities

Woodsville

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has

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the

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apply

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remarkable

rainfall

comes

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apply

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Vocabulary: Replace the words inches, rainfall, woodsville, blackboro, rain with synonyms.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

145 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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