The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table depicts how many
inches
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about
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of
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rainfall
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, over the year between January to December in
Woodsville
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and
Blackboro
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.
Overall
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, in
Woodsville
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maximum
rainfall
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in
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from
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November to December. In
Blackboro
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it
become
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has
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minimal
rainfall
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compare
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compared
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with
Woodsville
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. In
Woodsville
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, it has
maximum
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a maximum
the maximum
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number of
raining
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rain
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in
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from
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November to
Decembe
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December
. It is about 6 and 5.5
inches
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respectively.
Lowest
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The lowest
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rain
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came in July and it
is
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was
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0.75
inches
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.
In
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From
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January to
July
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July,
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Woodsville
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rainfall
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dramatically
decrease
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decreased
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over these 7 months. It is shows 5,4,3.75,2.5,1.75,1.5 and 0.75 orderly. On the
oher
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other
hand
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hand,
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Blackboro
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normally
illustrate
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illustrates
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minimal
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the minimal
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value of
rain
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. In
Blackboro
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May to September
rainfall
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inches
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less than 1. July is
ths
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the
lowest
rain
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came in
this
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city. It is about 0.01.
In
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From
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January to
February
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February,
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it becomes much considerable
rain
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about 3,4
inches
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respectively.
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Finally
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Finally,
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compare
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compared
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with these two cities
Woodsville
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is
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has
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the
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apply
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remarkable
rainfall
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comes
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apply
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words inches, rainfall, woodsville, blackboro, rain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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