The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table depicts how many
inches
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about
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of
rainfall
, over the year between January to December in Use synonyms
Woodsville
and Use synonyms
Blackboro
.
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Overall
, in Linking Words
Woodsville
maximum Use synonyms
rainfall
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in
November to December. In Change preposition
from
Blackboro
it Use synonyms
become
minimal Verb problem
has
rainfall
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compare
with Wrong verb form
compared
Woodsville
.
In Use synonyms
Woodsville
, it has Use synonyms
maximum
number of Change the article
a maximum
the maximum
raining
Replace the word
rain
in
November to Change preposition
from
Decembe
. It is about 6 and 5.5 Correct your spelling
December
inches
respectively. Use synonyms
Lowest
Correct article usage
The lowest
rain
came in July and it Use synonyms
is
0.75 Wrong verb form
was
inches
. Use synonyms
In
January to Change preposition
From
July
Add a comma
July,
Woodsville
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rainfall
dramatically Use synonyms
decrease
over these 7 months. It is shows 5,4,3.75,2.5,1.75,1.5 and 0.75 orderly.
On the Wrong verb form
decreased
oher
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other
hand
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hand,
Blackboro
normally Use synonyms
illustrate
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illustrates
minimal
value of Add an article
the minimal
rain
. In Use synonyms
Blackboro
May to September Use synonyms
rainfall
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inches
less than 1. July is Use synonyms
ths
lowest Correct your spelling
the
rain
came in Use synonyms
this
city. It is about 0.01. Linking Words
In
January to Change preposition
From
February
it becomes much considerable Add a comma
February,
rain
about 3,4 Use synonyms
inches
respectively. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Finally
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Finally,
compare
with these two cities Wrong verb form
compared
Woodsville
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is
Verb problem
has
the
remarkable Correct article usage
apply
rainfall
Use synonyms
comes
.Verb problem
apply
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words inches, rainfall, woodsville, blackboro, rain with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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