the chart below shows that Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the Anthropologist in work after five years

the chart below shows that Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the Anthropologist in work after five years
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The given chart and table illustrate the type of occupations and income of Anthropology
graduates
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, the majority of
graduates
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choose to be working
full time
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, within five years, more people who work in the government sector receive higher earnings than freelancers and employees in private companies. After graduation, around 52% of Anthropologists
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decided to work full-time. Approximately one-fifth of total
graduates
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are working part-time and 5% of them do it
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pursuing postgraduate study. There is a total of 8% proportion who choose to pursue postgraduate full-time. The rest of the
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remain unemployed or not known, which are 12% and 8% respectively. After 5 years of tenure in each type of employment, half of the employees in the government sector receive more than $100,000;
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one-third of the employees have a salary over $75,000. There are similar proportions of people who receive salaries over $25,000 and $50,000 in both freelance and government sectors, which are 5% and 15% respectively.
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, in the private sector
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