The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations.
This
bar chart shows about
people who Change preposition
apply
belongs
to the Change the verb form
belong
catholic
religions in various nations such
as China, India, Correct article usage
the phillippines
phillippines
, Vietnam, Korea and Japan.
From the Correct your spelling
Philippines
Phillippines
overall
perspective, Philippines
had the highest amount of Correct article usage
the Philippines
catholic
religion in both two periods.
According to
the chart shown that
Philippines has the highest Correct determiner usage
the
people
Correct quantifier usage
number of people
belongs
to the Wrong verb form
belonging
catholic
religion which is
around 75 Wrong verb form
was
millions
folks in 2010 and Change to singular
million
this
ratio has
reduced slightly in 2013 which is 72 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
. Change to singular
million
In contrast
, China and India were
increased drastically the Unnecessary verb
apply
catholic
population from first
period to the Change the article
the first
last
year above mentioned which is India had 9 millions
from 15 Change to singular
million
millions
and China around 11 Change to singular
million
millions
from 19 Change to singular
million
millions
respectively.
These three nations were not Change to singular
million
noticeable
changes which slightly Change the word
noticeably
changes
from 2010 to 2013 which is Vietnam had around 5.5 Wrong verb form
changed
millions
to around 5.3 Change to singular
million
millions
and Korea had around 5.2 Change to singular
million
millions
to around 1.3 Change to singular
million
millions
respectively. Japan had 4 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2010 and Change to singular
million
catholic
Correct article usage
the catholic
religion
Replace the word
religious
popualtion
Correct your spelling
population
had
expanded slightly in 2013 which is around 5 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
.Change to singular
million
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