Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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It is claimed that an increase in the price of
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is the most effective way to solve surging traffic and pollution issues. I totally disagree with
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statement because it is an item of daily use, which people need to get at any cost.
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, introducing electric vehicles and better
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might be effective in coping with
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issue. Some would argue that an in the cost of gasoline will lead to a reduction in the use of automobiles and their catastrophic effects on the environment.
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is to say that the higher be price of fossil oil, the lesser the number of cars, buses, trucks etc. on the roads.
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will reduce the release of smoke and greenhouse gases into the earth’s environment, which are principal contributors to global warming and air pollution.
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, I think that
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is a necessity that everyone should purchase even if its cost rises.
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, the public in Pakistan was compelled to purchase
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at a high rate
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inflation, but it did not reduce the amount of traffic on the roads. Installing automatic electric vehicles would be more effective.
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is to say that the
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of automobiles should be modified to operate using electricity or solar energy rather than
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oil. It will
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wipe out environmental pollutants and toxic gases emitted by combustion
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.
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, Tesla Motors produces excellent cars that produce zero CO2, and its sister company, Solar City allows people to produce their own electricity using innovative photovoltaic roof tiles and power wall battery packs.
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, I believe that the cut-off in the price of petrol is not suitable for tackling traffic and environmental pollution,
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other measures
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as the production of electric
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should be taken into consideration.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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