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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 report derives from a diagram which illustrates the comparison between the current layout of the library and its previous plan relating to 20 years ago. As an initial point, it is noticeable that
although
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 the main entrance has remained the same, every
room
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 on the previous library's floor has been replaced by some other modern amenities. Upon entering, there used to
set
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a
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tables and chairs which can be seen now as straight ahead. They replaced the resting tools
to
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in
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 the east
room
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at
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 the left which
have
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 storytelling events,
sofa
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a sofa
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 and children's
fictions
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fiction
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books
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where
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was
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were
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at
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 the right side.
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,
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 the adult fiction
books
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 section used to be located between the CDs, videos, and computer games section and reading
room
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 has moved to the opposite side
if
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 the site, to provide spaces for reference
books
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.
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,
cafe
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the cafe
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room
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where
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which
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be
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at
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 the right in front of the entrance was not
founded
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 at the old version of the library's floor.
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,
children's
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the children's
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books
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 section has given place to the current lecture
room
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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