The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.
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the pie charts illustrate the satisfaction of those visitors in both two period
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the table, the population of visitors increased by 18,000 people
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