You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Although
smoking is infamous for being one of the most addictive, yet unhealthy habits, nevertheless
quite many people
are keep
smoking. It is my view that because Change the verb form
keep
people
find an
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apply
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gratification Correct your spelling
instantaneous
while
enhaling
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inhaling
exhaling
enhancing
smoke
as well as
positive
perception that certain individuals have on smoking Add an article
the positive
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make
it Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
a
desirable for many. Psychological warfare is one of the most pragmatic Correct article usage
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way
to tackle Change to a plural noun
ways
with
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apply
this
addiction.
First of all, the age of smoking has been decreasing with a continuous trend among the young generation of people
, resulting in many diseases as well as
discomfort. It is important to acknowledge that smoking is one of the most obsessive habits that any person could possess due to
the perilous chemicals such
as nicotine. For instance
, scientists have proved that nicotine consumptions
is highly addictive and has Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
capability
to enslave Change the article
the capability
people
who are addictive
to it. Replace the word
addicted
Secondly
, there is also
a group of individuals who contend that smoking cigerattes
relieves their stress somehow. By Correct your spelling
cigarettes
enhaling
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inhaling
smoke
they are able to control their stress level amid the time of difficulties as the smoke
which is rich in certain substances annihilates many neurons and healthy cells, once it is enhailed
into Correct your spelling
enhanced
a
human body. Thereby, Correct article usage
the
people
who have to perform in an environment with excessive stress tend to smoke
cigerattes
.
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cigarettes
On the other hand
, giving up smoking habit
is not easy and requires an unwavering decision and immense dedication to the purpose. Commencing a public Fix the agreement mistake
habits
phsychological
war on smoking will have a corresponding impact on the diminishing portion of smokers in Correct your spelling
psychological
socities
. Correct your spelling
society
In addition
to that public awareness compaigns
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campaigns
such
as integration
of anti-smoking education programmes and conducting seminars in workshops and public areas to discourage Correct article usage
the integration
people
from smoking anda
eventually for them to forswear Correct your spelling
and
this
jeopardizing behaviour.
To conclude
, despite the majority of population
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the population
is
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being
the
risks and consequences associated with smoking, Change preposition
of the
however
some of them Add the comma(s)
however,
are still keep
smoking because they are too addictive to give it up. Raising public awareness and strengthening the mental abilities to fight off Change the verb form
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smoking are the most efficient solutions to Correct article usage
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