The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.

The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.
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The bar chart gives information on the number of individuals using mobile
phones
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and land lines, among 100 people, in seven selected nations, including Denmark, US, Canada, Germany, Uk, Sweden and Italy. Looking at the figures,
it is clear that
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some areas
Overall
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, Italy, Uk and Sweden are the nations in which mobile
phones
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are more popular: around 90% of the population possess one of them. A different pattern emerged for Canada and the US, where less than half inhabitants have a mobile phone. Looking at the figures, we can see that owning both landlines and mobile
phones
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is very common in Denmark and Germany.
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, more than 80 danish out of 100 have the two. The quantity is a bit lower when we look at Germany’s numerical values. It is interesting to note that land lines are very common among Canada and the US: people who own one are approximately twice as many as the one who have mobile
phones
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. Meanwhile, just 42% of Italians have a telephone line, making Italy the country with the smallest number. The second lowest is Great Britain, followed by Germany. The following graph shows the number of people (by age) attending cinema more than once a month.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words phones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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