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The pie charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2005 and projections for 2055.

The pie charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2005 and projections for 2055.
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The two pie charts illustrate the
populations'
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 ages of Oman and Spain in 2005 and future projections for 2055. Overview, in Oman country, the number of seniors and
adolescents
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populations
 will
estimately
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ultimately
increase
 whilst, the
age
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ages
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 0-14 will be decreased by 2055. Meanwhile, In
spain
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Spain
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, it was expected in 2055 that the
age
 0-14 and 60+
years
 old
populations
 will experience a downfall and only
age
 15-59
who
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apply
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will
increase
 in terms of the number of
populations
. For Oman in 2005, the
citizens
with
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aged
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age
 0-14
years
 old were equal
with
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to
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 those
who
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apply
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aged 60+
years
, both
were
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accounted for 48%. Meanwhile, it was only 4% of the
populations
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population
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who
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apply
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age
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aged
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 15-59
years
 old.
However
, it was projected that in 2055, there will be an
increase
of
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in
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 the number of senior
citizens
 and those
who
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apply
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age
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aged
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 15-59, with approximately
9
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% and 2%
increase
 respectively. In Spain, it was mostly populated by senior
citizens
 which accounted
over
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for over
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 50% of the total
populations
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population
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 in 2005. For ages 0-14 and 15-59, there were only 14% and 24% respectively.
On the other hand
, it was predicted that
citizens
 with
age
 15-59 will have an
unpward
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upward
 trend
by
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 18% whilst, both seniors and juniors
populations
 will experience a downfall by 16% and 2% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words populations, increase, age, years, citizens with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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