The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

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The charts compare the temperatures and daylight time lengths in

London

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and

Sydney

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during one weekend of the

last

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month in 2018.

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, there are significant variances between the two cities,

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is much colder than

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and suffers from shorter day hours than the latter.

London

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's weather changed slightly: its values are about 10 and the highest one (13) was observed on Saturday.

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Sydney

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's warmth averaged at 28. The lowest is 26, yet

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was still higher than

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's highest temperature.

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began to enjoy the sunshine from around 8:00 am and it lasted until nearly 4:00 pm, the length is averaged 7 hours and 50 minutes.

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people in

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saw the sunrise 2 hours earlier and the sunset occurred at 8:00pm, the duration is almost two times of

London

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's. We may reasonably believe that though in the same dates, one is experiencing winter

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the other is in summer.

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