The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams illustrate a method of creating electricity from the force of waves using a specifically designed man-made construction. The structure, consisting of a wave chamber and a tall column containing a
turbine
, is erected on a steeply sloping coastal cliff or sea wall where it is subject to the movement of the ocean waves. The first diagram shows how the incoming wave fills a large chamber and forces the
air
inside
this
space up the column and through the
turbine
. The pressure of the
air
rotates the
turbine
which generates a current of electricity. The process does not end there for the structure is able to continue producing power as the sea recedes as can be seen in the second diagram. As the water now flows away from the structure, it draws
air
back down the column and downwards through the
turbine
in the same direction as the previous upward flow of
air
. The
turbine
continues to turn
thus
generating even more electricity.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words turbine, air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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