The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced
The
process
diagram delineates the details of the various ways of producing orange juices and selling them in the market.
Apparently, at first glance, there are two distinct processes to produce orange Use synonyms
juice
, the first Use synonyms
process
has four basic stages; Use synonyms
however
, the second Linking Words
process
gets its raw material which is a concentrated Use synonyms
juice
from stage one of extracting a Use synonyms
juice
and it has seven steps of manufacturing the ready to drink juices which is preserve and available in the market.
Beginning with the Use synonyms
process
of production of fresh Use synonyms
juice
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at the first stage
the fresh oranges are brought to the factory via truck, Linking Words
further
they are washed under the water. Linking Words
Next,
the clean oranges are moved to the vessel to extract fresh Linking Words
juice
from the oranges; at Use synonyms
this
stage, the solid waste is separated and fed to the cattle, Linking Words
however
, the fresh orange Linking Words
juice
is Use synonyms
further
stored in a packing and without any added preservatives and Linking Words
also
available at nearby shops.
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, fresh orange Linking Words
juice
is Use synonyms
also
developed as concentrate Linking Words
juice
. The steps of preparing fresh orange Use synonyms
juice
remain the same, Use synonyms
instead
of packaging they are loaded in the refrigerator truck and transferred to the machine to evaporate the water from it. After the evaporation Linking Words
process
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this
concentrated Linking Words
juice
is stored in cans and Use synonyms
this
step is known as ‘canning’, Linking Words
thus
, they are transported to the warehouse. These canned juices are Linking Words
further
sent to the factory and added water to prepare Linking Words
juice
. The Use synonyms
last
steps remain the same as packaging and Linking Words
finally
selling to the shops.
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Thus
, it is an elaborated Linking Words
process
of making orange Use synonyms
juice
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