The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced

The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced
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The
process
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diagram delineates the details of the various ways of producing orange juices and selling them in the market. Apparently, at first glance, there are two distinct processes to produce orange
juice
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, the first
process
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has four basic stages;
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, the second
process
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gets its raw material which is a concentrated
juice
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from stage one of extracting a
juice
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and it has seven steps of manufacturing the ready to drink juices which is preserve and available in the market. Beginning with the
process
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of production of fresh
juice
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,
at the first stage
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the fresh oranges are brought to the factory via truck,
further
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they are washed under the water.
Next,
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the clean oranges are moved to the vessel to extract fresh
juice
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from the oranges; at
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stage, the solid waste is separated and fed to the cattle,
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, the fresh orange
juice
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is
further
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stored in a packing and without any added preservatives and
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available at nearby shops. Moving
further
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, fresh orange
juice
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is
also
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developed as concentrate
juice
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. The steps of preparing fresh orange
juice
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remain the same,
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of packaging they are loaded in the refrigerator truck and transferred to the machine to evaporate the water from it. After the evaporation
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,
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concentrated
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is stored in cans and
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step is known as ‘canning’,
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, they are transported to the warehouse. These canned juices are
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sent to the factory and added water to prepare
juice
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. The
last
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steps remain the same as packaging and
finally
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selling to the shops.
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, it is an elaborated
process
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of making orange
juice
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, juice with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Orchard
  • Harvest
  • Processing facility
  • Quality control
  • Extraction
  • Pasteurization
  • Filtration
  • Preservatives
  • Fortification
  • Deaeration
  • Shelf life
  • Distribution
  • Bottling
  • Packaging
  • Labeling
  • Environmental impact
  • Sustainability
  • Waste management
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