The two maps describe how the Colwick Arts Centre changed from 2005 to now

The two maps describe how the Colwick Arts Centre changed from 2005 to now
The two maps describe how the Colwick Arts Centre changed from 2005 until now.
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, as
it
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can be seen in the illustrations, the
center
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witnessed several improvements, especially
wasteland
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the wasteland
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and
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the constructions
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constructions
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of new buildings.
According to
the map, the concert hall and the cinema shared a building in the past.
However
, they have now been divided into two separate buildings, which are located
on
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the upper right-hand corner of the
center
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. The meeting rooms are moved to the northwest corner.
In addition
, they
also
built a drama studio between the cinema and the meeting rooms,
as well as
a central exhibition area constructed in the middle of the
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. In 2005, the two galleries were knocked down, and they built a new gallery and a café on the middle west side of the midpoint. The
center
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converts the wasteland into an outdoor exhibition and performance space. In the middle of the plain, which is surrounded by rows of trees, has been erected a stage.
Moreover
, students of the centre will find many desks on each side of the trees.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words center with synonyms.
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