The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.

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of Australian 5-14-year-old kids during their free time. The data reveals that most

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Australian boys

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and girls Australian children like to watch TV or videos to spend their time. It can be seen that the first chosen activity is watching TV or videos, a hundred per cent of both male and female Australian children have the same interest.

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, Electronic or Computer games are the second chosen with four in five of the young men

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and three in five of the young women.

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, the preferred

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of the schoolgirls are the same on Bike riding and Art and

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crafts

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which are almost sixty per cent. Meanwhile, the third preferred hobby of the schoolboys is bike riding, where around

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of all

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enjoy

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.

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, skateboarding or rollerblading is the next chosen hobby of the

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with almost forty per cent and decreasing slightly in the percentage of arts and crafts.

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the girls feel that skateboarding and rollerblading

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less interesting than others

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only

one quarter

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of them prefer

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.

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, both schoolboys and schoolgirls like to watch TV or videos more than other

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. Fewer interesting

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for the

boys

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art and for the girls are skateboarding or rollerblading.