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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides details of three main categories of exports in Someland in
2005
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the 2005
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, 2015, and 2025 forecast, measured in USD billions.
Overall
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, only meat products had a decreasing historical trend,
while
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 international tourism is the only category which is predicted to rise in the future.
To begin
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 with, meat products accounted for 4
billion
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 in 2005, before moderately dropping by roughly 500 million in a decade, and are expected to decrease again to approximately 3
billion
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 in 2025.
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, dairy commodities traded for around 5
billion
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in
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at
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 the beginning of the reporting period and
subsequently
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 spiked to almost 8
billion
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 in the next ten years.
However
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, the prediction will slightly decrease to about 7.5
billion
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 in the forecasted year.
Lastly
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, international tourism was gradually increasing from barely above 6
billion
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 in 2005 to roughly 7
billion
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 in 2015. It is the only category with a rising forecast by almost
two-third
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two-thirds
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 of its initial number.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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