many people aresupportive of the opinion that young children should study at home , because there are so many problems in schools nowadays. to what extent do you agree?

A substantial number of individuals have a strong view

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young

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, which says that pupils should study at home because of so many problems that are in schools today. In

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essay,I will share my opinion about how much it is necessary and acceptable. it is crystal clear that

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these days there are too many problems in study places almost for young

children

;in fact,some of the schools are not safe around the world;

therefore

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children

went to school and parents had no concern about

such

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, studying online is more desire for some parents who are worried about their

children

's health.

On the other hand

, in the modern days that we are living humans are becoming more alone ; indeed, family ties are not like past anymore;

therefore

,they are almost fairly small and most

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families just have one child;

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,parents who have one young child prefer to keep him/her next to themselves and study at home, in order to loosing them.

Hence

, their child used to be alone and may never make friends and can not participate in communities.

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, in my opinion, studying young pupils at home , will

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some problems with social conditions, which are not suitable in time.