The chart below shows the changes in the average price of bread, milk, cereal, chicken wings, and marmalade in the UK from 1993 to 2018.

The chart below shows the changes in the average price of bread, milk, cereal, chicken wings, and marmalade in the UK from 1993 to 2018.
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The line graph illustrates the
price
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fluctuations of 4 food items
such
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as
bread
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,
milk
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, cereals,
chicken
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wings
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and jam in the United Kingdom from 1993 to 2018. In general, all foods tend to rise in
price
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over time.
Bread
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,
milk
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and jam, which had the lowest
prices
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in 1993, have increased considerably in value up to 2018. The
price
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of
chicken
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wings
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is
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maintained until a substantial increase in 2013. The most expensive
price
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in 1993 was cereals increasing significantly in value in 2008.
On the other hand
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, the foods with the lowest
prices
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in 1993,
such
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as
bread
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and
milk
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, were increasing their
prices
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regularly, until in 2003 the
price
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of
milk
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increases
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rapidly to approximately 1 pound, declining slightly in 2010 from about 0.25
pounds
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to grow considerably increasing its
price
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to approximately 2
pounds
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.
However
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,
bread
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suffers
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a
price
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increase in 2010 reaching approximately quadruple its value. The third food with the lowest
price
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1993
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in 1993
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is marmalade rising its
price
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rapidly from 1998 to 2008 to approximately 1.25
pounds
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, declining moderately to less than a pound in 2013 to have a growth peak to almost 1.5 in 2018.
On the other hand
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, the foods with the highest
prices
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in 1993 were
chicken
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wings
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and cereals.
Although
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the
price
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of
chicken
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wings
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fluctuated with increases and decreases slightly until 2013, it had a substantial growth reaching a
price
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of almost 2.25
pounds
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.
Conversely
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, the
price
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of cereal, which in 1993 was 1.5
pounds
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, grew to a
price
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of approximately 2.25
pounds
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in 1998, declining subtly to a
price
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of almost 2
pounds
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before reaching a dramatic growth peak in 2008, reaching a
price
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of almost 3
pounds
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, such".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, bread, milk, chicken, wings, prices, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "substantial" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerably" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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