The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph demonstrates the pollution level in London between
1600and
2000. It is measured in micrograms per cubic metre.
Correct your spelling
1600 and
Overall
, it is obviously clear that both
Sulphur
dioxide
and Smoke
have
started from Unnecessary verb
apply
lowest
point and Add an article
the lowest
had
fluctuated Unnecessary verb
apply
at the end
of the 20th century. In addition
, both
of them experienced recovery. Clearly, the Sulphur
dioxide
also
has a significant growth and fall throughout the given period compared to the Smoke
.
Between 1600 and 1750, they started to increase, while
the figure for Sulphur
dioxide
skyrocketed, Smoke
increased at a slow pace. Besides
, in this
time period , Sulphur
dioxide
and Smoke
noted their highest point at 750 and 250 metre
,respectively. Change to a plural noun
metres
Then
the indicators continued to grow.
For the rest of the years, they both
continued to increase at a slow pace. Following
this
numbers kept fluctutating
until between 1850 and 1900, Correct your spelling
fluctuating
where
Correct word choice
when
sulphur
dioxide
reached a high of approximetely
800 micrograms per cub Correct your spelling
approximately
metres
and Fix the agreement mistake
metre
pollutuion
was caused by Correct your spelling
pollution
smoke
which peaked at 450 micrograms per cub metres
.
During the 20th century, the levels of Fix the agreement mistake
metre
both
pollutants fell dramatically, though there was a great deal of fluctuation within this
fall.Clearly
air pollution was a bigger problem in London in the early 20th century than it is now.Add a comma
Clearly,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words both, sulphur, dioxide, smoke with synonyms.
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