The charts below show the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries.

The charts below show the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries.
The charts illustrate the distribution of the world's
water
and the percentages of
water
use in
three
different sectors in
three
countries.
Overall
, it is evident that salt
water
accounts for the vast majority of
water
on Earth, with the rest composed of fresh
water
. In the bar chart,
water
is used the most for agriculture in Egypt and Saudi Arabia,
while
industrial
water
use is the most predominant in Canada. The pie charts reveal that salt
water
makes up 97% of the total
water
and freshwater comprises a mere 3%.
In addition
, freshwater constitutes 79% of ice and glaciers, 20% of groundwater, and 1% of surface
water
. Shifting our focus to the
three
nations'
water
consumption patterns, the share of the agriculture category is the highest in Egypt (80%) and Saudi Arabia (75%), starkly contrasting with that of Canada at only 10%.
Conversely
,
while
the industry sector utilizes a substantial 80% in Canada, the figures for Egypt and Saudi Arabia only record 5% and 10%, respectively. Interestingly, the shares of domestic
water
use were similar among the
three
nations, at 10% or less.
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