The charts below show the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries.
The charts illustrate how the global
water
is distributed and its uses in three different countries. Overall
, the majority of water
in the world is salt water
with the freshwater mainly source
from ice and glaciers. The Middle Eastern countries (Egypt and Saudi Arabia) use Wrong verb form
sourced
water
mainly for agriculture. In contrast
, industry is in need of water
the most in Canada.
97% of water
across the globe is from salt water
and the rest of 3% is from freshwater. The freshwater is divided from
three sources. A large part of freshwater is from ice and glaciersChange preposition
into
Verb problem
,
that is
reaching 79% of it, the other 20% is from the ground, and the rest is from the surface (1%).
The three different countries (Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada) utilize water
for various uses which are agriculture, domestic and industry. Egypt and Saudi Arabia use around 75-80% of water
for agriculture. On the other hand
, Canada uses 80% of its water
for the industry sector.Submitted by a.wangsaatmaja on
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