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The influence of AI is growing rapidly. Some people are excited about the possibilities while others are terrified. What is your opinion about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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AI technologies are becoming more and more powerful over the
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 twelve months. Some
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 believe that they create new markets and will be a boon for the global economy. Meanwhile, others think that we are in grave danger. It is partly agreed that generative artificial intelligence can be a hazard.
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 essay will shed some light on the issue and provide some suitable examples to support the writer's position. On the one hand,
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 tech changes exert beneficial effects on public education and boost
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's productivity. Generative AI, like ChatGPT, may be used in a significant number of fields.
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, young
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 worldwide use large language models to excel in maths or develop their language skills. So,
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 changes in the IT sector open new possibilities to the young generations.
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,
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 development of large language models or other generative machine learning networks can create general AI. Unfortunately,
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 technology is completely unpredictable by its nature and may be dangerous.
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, the industry leader Open AI invests more than sixty per cent of investors' money on safety and "AI alignment" to make their algorithms as safe as possible. As we can see, global tech leaders are of grave concern, too.
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, it can be clearly seen that rapid AI development provides not only
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benefits but
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drawbacks, too. And every person must decide
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, in general, a majority of
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 do not have enough authority and power to exert any influence on the situation. I believe it will be a great story with a dramatic, memorable final.

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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
For task response, expand on the provided points by fully developing your arguments and explanations. Aim for a more balanced approach to both sides of the argument, if affirming a partially agree position, to meet the task requirements more effectively. Make sure your introduction clearly presents the topic and your stance, while your conclusion should effectively summarize your argument without introducing new ideas.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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