The table below shows expenditures of four car on advertising in the UK in 2002

The table below shows expenditures of four car on advertising in the UK in 2002
The given table illustrates the outlay of four different car
companies
on five types of advertising ( press, cinema, outdoor, radio and television) in the UK in the year 2002. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that all of the
companies
spent the highest expenditure on press, and TV,
whereas
cinema and outdoor
ads
were the least.
Additionally
, the expenditure for radio remained the same for those firms. Regarding TV
ads
, Cetirizine was the most popular company spending the highest expenditure on
this
advertisement at 70
million
dollars
followed by
Vauxhall
,
Renault
and
Rover
with 65, 59 and 45
million
dollars
respectively. If it were compared to the outlay spending on press only 45 and 38
Million
dollars
for
Renault
and
Rover
. The expense for
Vauxhall
and Cetirizine only had a difference of almost 4
million
dollars
. Outdoor
ads
,
on the other hand
, only had been used as much as 7
million
dollars
by
Renault
and
Vauxhall
companies
for advertising their car.
Rover
just
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ahead higher than
Rover
with 3 and 2
million
dollars
. Just
Renault
and
Vauxhall
used the cinema
to
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ads
their
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product with 6 and 5
million
dollars
separately
Rephrase
respectively
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.
In addition
, all of the
companies
spent 15
million
dollars
advertising the car on the radio.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words companies, ads, million, dollars, vauxhall, renault, rover with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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