Movies with spectacular car chases are a thrill to watch and fun too but they have led to an increase in car accidents on urban roads. Do you agree? What do you think can be done to make the youth more aware of road safety?
Although
it is incredibly fun to watch car chasing
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car-chasing
scenes
in some movies, this
may lead to the
increasing rate of Correct article usage
an
car
accidents
especially on urban roads. In this
essay, I will discuss why I firmly believe that this
is true and I will propose some strategies to avoid further
adverse impacts on this
matter.
There are many convincing reasons why this
particular Correct determiner usage
these
scenes
of car
chases are dangerous. First and foremost, we should acknowledge that young people are always curious, specifically to
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about
scenes
that they adore much. In this
case, showing the spectacular car
chases possibly urge
them to Correct subject-verb agreement
urges
drive
fast like what they watch. Another thing to consider is that some youth as
their age do not Change preposition
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enough capabilities Verb problem
possess
in doing
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to do
such
professional actions. Even if they have been trained to do so, they may lack of
some wise consideration in taking the crucial decisions on the road. Remove the preposition
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As a result
, this
exciting yet careless behaviour may lead to the rising numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
car
accidents
.
Further
effects that may be caused by these reason
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this reason
these reasons
be solve
through some serious initiatives. Change the verb form
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Firstly
, it is a must to establish particular regulations on minimum
age for driving on the road. By implementing Add an article
the minimum
a minimum
this
, those who are still underage would be unable even to try to drive
, unless they are on training accompanied by adults or professionals. Another sollution
is providing the proper training as a main requirement before getting Correct your spelling
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the
legal driving permit. Correct article usage
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This
is because many people getting
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get
permit
just by paying money to the officials without having enough capabilities to Fix the agreement mistake
permits
drive
wisely. If we take the training seriously, the accidents
could possibly be reduced.
In conclusion, I agree that the thrilled
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scenes
of car
chasing might lead to the
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increasing
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increase
of
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in
car
accidents
especially for youth as they are typically curious to try what they watch without having proper capabilities. This
issue can be tackled by implementing regulation
on Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
minimum
age for driving and providing the required training before they get legal Add an article
the minimum
a minimum
permit
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