Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to information in many countries. This is a danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to

information

in many countries.

This

is a danger to our

societies

. Accessibility to raw

data

which

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has been provided on web pages is not controllable and might bring unexpected results for countries ,

for example

, personal privacy breaking by some users , social-political documentaries could be a source of conflict between the public contrary to other

groups

,

however

, classifying

data

in a long

time

will stop innovation and creativity to progress

societies

,so , in some aspects, I agree with the main hypothesis that some sort of

data

might be dangerous for us if It has not and speedy and controls on that.I will extend ideas in the following sentences. Transforming pieces of

information

through

web

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are more convenient method because it has speedy much of

information

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the information

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are

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is

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not classified properly ,so , it can be a source of chaos in the human mind and push uncontrollable behaviour in users ,

for example

, when some companies want to prompt their importance by increasing suddenly in their goods ,only professionals in economic know that

this

is a scam news but speedy distribution of news for many people can push stress and turn on the unwanted behaviour like shopping and saving these goods and it might be a source of traffic inflation and blockage streets ,so , emergency hospital machines could not be able give their services in

time

and the rate of sudden death is going to high ,in

finally

, you have a false

data

because of speedy uncontrollable

data

in the first plot . In another aspect, access to

information

is more favourable among

societies

, because , they can develop the border of knowledge and find the solutions to many problems ,

however

, when different

groups

of society have access to

data

without

cautious

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,they can interrupt the efforts of other

groups

in the same

time

,

for example

, physicians are working on some viruses that can be transformed genetical basis in some ethnics group , if , in a same

time

lawyers are working o discrimination studies on ethnic

groups

, they are more confused about some actions in the first group ,so ,accessible without control and speedy might be created unwanted fighting among

groups

. In conclusion , I believe classifying and arrangement patiently are better than speedy and unlimited accessibility to

data

for

societies

.