The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Sommarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Sommarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates the process of making
sugar
out of
sugar
cane. In general, there are five levels after harvesting the canes, the
juice
is gained from crashing canes the
syrup
is made by raising the temperature of the
juice
and the
sugar
crystals are separated from the
syrup
According to
the diagram, it takes 12 to 18 months for
sugar
cane to be ready for harvest, there are two ways of harvesting, using machines or doing it by hand. After they have been harvested, canes are crushed in a machine to extract the
juice
. The
juice
has to be purified, and for that limestone filter is used. The next level is turning the
juice
to
Change preposition
into
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syrup
,
this
level is processed by an evaporator, which heats up the
juice
to become
syrup
. The next level is dividing
sugar
crystals from
syrup
by a centrifuge.
Finally
, the crystals are dried and their temperature is increased to finish the manufacturing process and have
sugar
.
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