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Some people believe that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital Era as all writings can be stored electronically. Other think that printed books still play an important role. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Technology
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has
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 flourished by leaps and bounds in each and every
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field
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, especially education. Some
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claim
 that printed
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 will exist in
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 modern era
due to
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 the digital notes that can be
stiored
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stored
 electronically
whereas
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 others say that printed magazines
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 a crucial part in
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people's
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 now.
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discuss
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 both viewpoints and I will give my opinion in
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To begin
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the traditional
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 method of novels can be saved
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 using technology like computerised, and
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, wherever we can acquire all
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information
pieces of information
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 from the computer. To be more specific,
books
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 keeping time and space are unnecessary when all printed
books
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to become
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store
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stored
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 by
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electronic gadgets.
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, Indian most universities have modern
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libraries
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instead
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 of
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traditional
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,
therefore
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,
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students can easily use all kinds of academic materials from
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library
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libraries
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. All printed publications can be stored electronically
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gets
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get
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 more benefits.
In contrast
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, printed
books
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 play a crucial role around the world because
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 kind of novel can give more facts and figures about any
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topic
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. These
books
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 are written by the original writer,
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, no one
cannot
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can
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 steal and upload from the internet.
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, printed publications can stimulate reader's
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interest
 to read more, and
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, people get enormous knowledge
as well as
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they
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have a chance to read and understand
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all characters without getting any internet troubles.
Then
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,
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 provides more
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comfortable
 and
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 to the reader without eye
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staring
.
To conclude
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, electronic gadgets give more benefits to folks. Printed magazines can be converted to electronically in order
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 the population will obtain all
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the details
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 from wherever they need.
However
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,
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 method of
books
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provide
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provides
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 more
comfortable
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 and
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interest
 to the reader. In my opinion
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this
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,
conventional
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the conventional
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 way of
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printed
books
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play
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plays
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 a crucial part
among
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in
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 the world.

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coherence cohesion
Ensure your introduction clearly presents the topic and includes a thesis statement that outlines your views. Throughout your essay, paragraphs should be well-organized, each containing one main idea with clear topic sentences.
task achievement
Work on developing clear and relevant main points, expanded with detailed support and examples. Aim to fully address the task by discussing both views comprehensively and explaining your own opinion clearly.
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