The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph compares initial salaries and their figures after three years in five occupations in the United Kingdom, measured in GBP,
while
the table shows the average duration in a week of each profession, measured in hours
. Overall
, salaries of
all jobs slightly rose in three years with Change preposition
for
underground
driver recorded as the highest despite having the shortest weekly working Correct article usage
the underground
hours
and nurse
had the lowest compensation, Add an article
the nurse
a nurse
while
teacher
Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
as well as
firefighter
had the longest average working Fix the agreement mistake
firefighters
hours
per week.
Firstly
, in both years, underground
driver was the highest-paying job at around half a hundred, followed by Add an article
the underground
firefighter
at around 40,000 and teacher with a mere 10,000 from that number. The rest of the occupations namely police and nurse received salaries at slightly beyond 20,000 and below that number Add an article
a firefighter
in particular
order.
Lastly
, teacher
and Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
firefighter
had the highest average time for duties Fix the agreement mistake
firefighters
both
at 55 Correct pronoun usage
apply
hours
weekly, followed by police officials who spent 40 hours
per week at work, while
nurse
accounted for a mere 2 Fix the agreement mistake
nurses
hours
from underground driver's mean working hours
at 36 which was the lowest figure.Submitted by dandelionandburdock on
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