The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the amount of
visitors
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of
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to
particular
Caribbean Correct article usage
a particular
island
between 2010 and 2017. Use synonyms
This
provides a piece of information about Linking Words
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
cruises
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cruise
ships
, staying on Use synonyms
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island
, and Add an article
the island
total
amount of all Add an article
the total
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tourist
.
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tourists
Overall
, the amount of cruise Linking Words
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ships
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ship
pessenger
has increased Correct your spelling
passenger
passengers
while
Linking Words
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tourist
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tourists
stayed
on the Wrong verb form
staying
island
had a Use synonyms
decline
trend in the Change the verb form
declining
last
4 years.
From 2010 until 2013, the total number has Linking Words
had
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apply
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an increase
increase
over Wrong verb form
increased
the
time with two main Correct article usage
apply
variable
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variables
shows
Wrong verb form
showing
different
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a different
pattern
. The Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
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visitors
staying on Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
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island
displayed an increase Correct article usage
the island
since
2011 Change preposition
from
until
2013 Change preposition
to
by
1 million of Change preposition
to
visitors
. Meanwhile, the number of cruise Use synonyms
ships
attendance had a period of instability and reached 0.5 Use synonyms
millions
in 2013.
From 2014 until 2017, both Change to singular
million
variable
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variables
shows
an upward movement and reached the Wrong verb form
showed
hinghest
point Correct your spelling
highest
by
3.5 million in total in 2017. The Change preposition
of
visitors
who Use synonyms
staying
on the Change the form of the verb
stay
island
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reach
a period of stability at 1.5 Wrong verb form
reached
millions
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million
of
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apply
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tourist
over Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
period
. Add an article
the period
a period
Moreover
, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
cruise
Correct quantifier usage
number of cruise
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ships
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ship
visitors
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has
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have
a
growth and peaked at 2 million Remove the article
apply
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tourist
in 2017.Change to a plural noun
tourists
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, ships, tourist with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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