Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visits such places?
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revolutionising
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the
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globalisation
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places
like Sahara
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the Sahara
Antartic
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Antarctic
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has some benefits along with
some drawbacks to visit
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There are some adavantages
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advantages
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tourists
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places
. One of the main benefits is that the tourists can explore the new venue as well as
new experience
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this
kind of location is far away from the residential places
, therefore
, they might get new experience
through their difficult journey. Another plus point is that the Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
traveler
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traveller
get
more earnings from their difficult weather conditions trip which means they take video and upload their online blogs and Change the verb form
gets
the
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also
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and
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a trip
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trip
where conditions are difficult like Fix the agreement mistake
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Antartica
.
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Antarctica
can
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trend. One of the main disadvantages is that cost of Change preposition
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trip
is quite expensive as compared to the Correct article usage
a trip
otherwell-known
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other well-known
places
because this
location is far away from residential venues, hence
, they should spent
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huge
amount Correct article usage
a huge
for
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on
accomodations
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accommodations
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vehicles
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extreme weather condition can cause more health issue even Correct article usage
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might
dead which means Verb problem
if they are
a
good physical condition and fitness is needed for Correct article usage
apply
such
these
trips Correct determiner usage
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besides
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climb
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have
a
good physical Correct article usage
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condtion
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condition
they
can climb without getting Hypothermia.
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To conclude
, the population like to visit the
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places
in order to they
get new Correct pronoun usage
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experience
and earnings from their trips Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
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benefits
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an expensive
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task achievement
Your essay needs to focus more on directly answering the benefits and disadvantages instead of providing indirect or semi-related points. Ensure that the question posed is being answered comprehensively.
coherence cohesion
Consider using a variety of cohesive devices and clearer paragraph structures to improve the flow of your essay. Moreover, avoid overcomplicating sentences and aim for clarity and brevity in your expression.
task achievement
Support main points with relevant, specific examples, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea. Try to elaborate more on the impact of tourism on these difficult environments instead of a general discussion on tourism.
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