The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about various types of
jobs
and its
earnings in the UK, Correct pronoun usage
their
while
the table displays data related to their working hours
per week.
Overall
, the amount of incomes of some jobs
had
Verb problem
apply
an
Correct article usage
apply
increase
after three years. Replace the word
increased
On the other hand
, some particular jobs
have more working hours
than others.
According to
the bar chart, there are two variable of comparisons
which is salary when started and salary after three years. A career that Fix the agreement mistake
comparison
become
the highest earner is underground driver at around 50.000, Change the verb form
becomes
this
number is double to police salary compared at
same time at around 25.000. The income of nurses had become the lowest in those Change preposition
apply
jobs
mentioned with just below 20.000.
Based on the table of working hours
, teacher and firefighter are two jobs
with the highest proportion of time for work at 55 hours
per week. The others
Correct quantifier usage
other
jobs
such
as police, nurse, and underground driver are working in lesser
amount of time. In a week, police are working for 40 Add an article
a lesser
hours
in
Change preposition
on
avarage
followed by Correct your spelling
average
nurse
at 38 Fix the agreement mistake
nurses
hours
and underground driver
at 36% respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
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