The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates a variety of occupations in the U.K. and their incomes. The table gives information about the average working
hours
per week
for each job.
Overall
, underground drivers
are the ones who can get the highest earnings while
the ones having the lowest are nurses
. In addition
, the underground drivers
have the fewest working hours
per week
; meanwhile, teachers and firefighters work
the most.
The statistics from the chart show that underground drivers
can get around £50,000 per year when they start their jobs and can obtain around £515, 000 after 3 years. Next are the firefighters and then
teachers, who can earn over £30,000 when started and around £35,000 after a period of 3 years. Surprisingly, nurses
have the lowest income at less than £20,000 at first and over £15,000 3 years later.
As we can see, the two jobs that have the most working hours
per week
are teachers and firefighters with 55 hours
. Meanwhile, underground drivers
who earn the most work
the least with only 36 hours
each week
. Nurses
work
2 hours
more than nurses
and police work
2 hours
more than the nurses
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, drivers, nurses, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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