The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year
The given diagrams illustrate the transformation of Southwest Airport before and after next year's construction.
Overall
, the major difference after reconstruction is the additional number of gates
for both departures and arrivals. Moreover
, several facilities are added to the proposed plan.
Currently, Southwest Airport has only 8 gates
serving departures and arrivals. Additionally
, there is a walkway path near gates
1 to 3. Furthermore
, there are minimal facilities in the departure area, such
as a café and a check-in counter.
In the proposed redevelopment plan, there is an expansion of the airport, doubling the number of existing gates
and introducing a sky train for added convenience. Between the gates
and passport control, shops will be added according to
the plan. While
the café and check-in counter will still exist in the future, there are changes in their locations. Additionally
, the departure area will feature a bag drop service across from the check-in counter. In contrast
, the arrival area, which used to be empty, will offer services such
as car hire, ATMs, and a café.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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