Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual docto

There are different opinions on whether to choose

alternative

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medicines

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or consider doctor

medicines

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I believe that visiting doctors is the best way to overcome

illness

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or injuries.

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,

alternative

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medicines

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could have a bad impact on people's health.

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some would argue that several

alternative

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medicines

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are herbal, there is no proof

clinically

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by

dermatologist

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that the

medicines

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can heal the sickness.

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, some said that washing eyes with certain kinds of leaves can heal

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eye problems. In fact, rather than solving the problem, the sickness could get worse.

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,

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medicines

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do not use a proper test to identify the real

illness

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. They

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do not have a certification for their practices. Eventually, it could lead to some misidentification of the

illness

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because the

alternative

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medicine only interprets the sickness by

experiences

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a car accident who experiences a fracture sometimes tends to go to massage treatment

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of going to the hospital. Rather than

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the best remedy for the

illness

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, it just delays the best time for treating the patient properly.

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, from my point of view, visiting a doctor should be a priority for people rather than trying

alternative

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medicines

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. Abandoning doctors to try other untrusted treatments is a negative development considering not everyone knows their bodies well and the difficulty to prove the effectiveness of these

medicines

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. People should

take

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their doctor to solve their health

problem

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so the

illness

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or injuries

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be treated appropriately as soon as possible.