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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Bookshop I hear that our bookshop will have a very important
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 famous speaker. As members of the local community, we are invited to suggest a good speaker. On
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 occasion, I want to advise some good speakers who can support and encourage
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 for people. Dr. David Hall has more experience in talking to the public.
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, He has written plenty of books and many books are bestsellers. I am fully confident he can make
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 interesting and motivate the public to attend. In his major works, Dr. David focuses on mindfulness which is a trend in our society. Numerous people are curious to learn about practising mindfulness.
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, he can persuade a lot of people who are eager to know about mindfulness in our daily lives. yours faithfully, Victor
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coherence cohesion
For logical structure, ensure that your ideas flow in a clear and natural order. Establish a strong opening statement, followed by your suggestions, and conclude with a compelling closing statement.
coherence cohesion
Introduction and conclusion are key components of a well-structured email. Include a proper salutation at the beginning and a formal sign-off at the end to frame your email appropriately.
coherence cohesion
To support your main points effectively, elaborate on your speaker suggestion with more detailed reasoning and examples of his expertise or reputation.
task achievement
While you addressed the required tasks, providing more depth can be beneficial. Expand your response with additional details such as specific titles of the speaker's works or notable accomplishments related to the event's theme.
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Ideas need to be expressed more comprehensively. Consider discussing how the speaker's themes align with current interests or provide a brief anecdote of Dr. David's impact on an audience.
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Providing specific examples will strengthen your task response. Include particular instances when Dr. David's talks or books have influenced people or made a difference in the community.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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