the table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002.

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The table illustrates and compares how much many spent by different automotive industries to advertise their products in the UK in 2002.

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Renault

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spent the highest amount of money on every type of advertising except on

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According to

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the figure,

Renault

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spent 45

million

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USD

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Press, which is the highest expenditure

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to only 38

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, 8

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, and 12

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USD

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spent by Rosser, Vauxhall, and Cetirizine respectively. Regarding advertising

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cinema, the amount of money paid by

Renault

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and Vauxhall was similar, standing between 5 and 6

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USD

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whereas

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Rover and Cetirizine spent nothing on

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type of advertising. With regard to outdoor,

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type of company was popular among

Renault

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and Citrizene, accounting for 7

million

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USD

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spent by these two companies. Meanwhile, Roser and Citrizene spent the lowest of their sums, only 2 and 3

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USD

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respectively. In

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, Cetirizine allocated 70

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for television advertising,

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Vauxhall's figure was slightly lower at 65

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. Meanwhile,

Renault

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spent 59

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on television ads,

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Rover only spent 45

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. It is

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noteworthy that the cost of radio advertising for all car manufacturers was the same - 15

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each.

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6
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

200 words

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the table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the UK in 2002.

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Discuss the benefits of this development and problems associated with it.

Some people think the government has the responsibility to pay for health care and education while others don’t. Discuss and give opinions.

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.