The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The line graph shows how often Australian teenagers consumed certain fast
food
items in various
years
. In the 20
years
from 1975 to 1995, the number of people going to eat pizza and hamburgers increased dramatically, by above 80
times
and 100
times
, respectively. In the remainder of the survey period, there was no change in the figures on that line.
In particular
, hamburgers ended up with the first rank of the three figures in that survey. Meanwhile 1975, fish and chips were the favorite junk
food
, with 100
times
more consumption. They
then
slowly dropped to 80
times
in the next 15
years
. Between 1990 and 2000, the number of teens spending time on convenience
food
fell by 50% and reached the bottom 40
times
in 2000.
Overall
, teenagers' consumption of fast
food
has changed over the
years
. Certain items were more prevalent in 1975,
while
others were more popular in 2000.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption
  • Trend
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fried chicken
  • Period
  • Health awareness
  • Availability
  • Taste preferences
  • Marketing influence
  • Implications
  • Western culture
  • Peak periods
  • Promotions
  • Societal habits
  • Patterns
  • Popular
  • Declined
  • Introduction
  • Eating habits
  • Summarise
  • Prediction
  • Recommendations
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